J-Rocks' Event.

          Let me tell you something about my unforgettable moment in my life. The unforgettable moment in my life is when my friend and I came and performed at J-Rocks' event which have been held in Blok M on November 21th, 2010. We went to there by motorcycle and arrived at 12.00. And then, we re-registration to fill the show band performance. After several days of practice so that we can perform optimally. Finally, we can look up and enliven the event. Not only that, I have a photo together with personnel of the J-Rocks. In a crowd of people. I tried to photograph along with personnel of the J-Rocks. But, I can only take a picture together with Anton and Wima. Really, something unforgettable moment in my life. I feel happy because I can come and fill in   the event.

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All about Hagi

          I want to tell my classmate. I have a lot of friends in this class whose have different characteristics. And I want to describe on of them. Well, his name is Muhammad Hagi Firdaus. You can call him Hagi or Mr. H. He is twenty years old. He lives in South Bekasi, exactly at Pekayon Jaya. He has two sisters. He is very tall. He is wearing eye glasses. I think he is clever. He seldom comes late to the class. He usually answers teacher's questions when the teacher give us questions. And then, his hobby is playing bass and guitar. He likes Kurt Cobain. That's all about my classmate in this class.

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